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Lifted, Dreamless 1/4

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AUTHOR: campylobacter
CHALLENGE THEME: Daniel/Vala 2011 Month of Love
CHARACTERS: Vala Mal Doran, Daniel Jackson
PAIRING: Daniel/Vala
CATEGORY: Missing scene; pre-ship
RATING: PG/Older Kids (mild gun violence)
SPOILERS/TIMELINE: 8x12 "Prometheus Unbound"
DISCLAIMER: This is Stargate SG-1 fanfic. (MGM's too bankrupt to sue me.)
WORD COUNT: 480 (prologue)
AUTHOR'S NOTE: I used the UK spell-check dictionary and punctuation for Vala's point of view instead of my native US defaults.
MISSING SCENE: Vala's point of view while Daniel was unconscious

Prologue: Immediately Susceptible

The sound of an energy weapon discharging and a strange, vibrating sensation throughout my armour draws my attention from the ship's schematics. When I turn about, I see a strapping, bespectacled man aiming a large gun at me. He shoots again.

As before, my armour dissipates the blast.

'Oh crap,' he mutters in dismay when I activate my zat'n'ktel. I shoot the poor wretch. He gasps in agony and falls, his useless weapon clattering to the floor.

I approach and kick the gun away, then take a good look at him. Short-haired, clean-shaven, immediately susceptible to zat blasts, just like the rest of his crew mates. He's lucky I still have the zat gun handy, and didn't resort to dispatching him with the plasma repeater mounted on the Kull gauntlet. Clever, too, as he'd avoided capture until now.

Also very attractive.

His features are nondescript, but have a pleasant regularity; the gentle expression, long eyelashes, and sensuous mouth are what make him handsome. Obviously an appreciative wife or husband takes tender care of him, and I certainly can't for her or his sake allow the man to develop a cricked neck as he lies in an undignified heap at my feet. Well, to be honest I don't know how long he'll remain unconscious, as strong and healthy as he appears.

Were it not for the force multiplier in the Kull suit, lifting him into the command chair would have taken more time; he's solid, muscular and heavy, and I'm becoming a bit wobbly from hunger. To my credit, I don't allow my hand to linger at his groin for longer than is necessary to push him upright into the seat, nor do I dwell on the substantial bulk under my gloved hand. After all, I've no time for prurient activities if there's a ship to hijack.

With spectacles askew on his face, he looks somewhat comic, slumped in the same chair where I'd encountered the ship's marble-domed general. I remove his eyeglasses and set them in a niche on the console, where I find some flexible polymer strips with locking ends durable enough to serve as wrist restraints. They'll do until I find more suitable fetters.

'What am I going to do with you?' I muse aloud, my voice ominously deepened by the helmet amplifier. I speculate on Tenat's reaction to keeping a live prisoner. Does this man have a family to feed? He undoubtedly fancies himself a hero, willing to risk his life to take back a ship, but somehow lacks the ruthlessness and wherewithal of a trained military commando. He might prove useful as a hostage, however, as he'd certainly refuse to cast his lot with me in my next caper.

Pity, really. I quite enjoy looking at him, but there's no way in a thousand galaxies a man like that would ever willingly work side-by-side with a woman like me.

Next update 4 February 2011: Chapter 1 'Intense Scrutiny' (rated PG-13/Teens; missing scene where Daniel undresses unconscious Vala; spoilers for 10x02 "Morpheus") AND gorgeous (but NOT SAFE FOR WORK) story banners & wallpapers by magnavox_23

zatted Daniel

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-01 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakespherical.livejournal.com
Beautiful job...can't wait for the porn. Where's teh NC-17 stuff honey? And that pic of Daniel is so damn hot....look at the jaw and angles on his face. I would have lingered waaaaaaaaaay longer on the substanital bulk....

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-01 10:09 pm (UTC)
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (facepalm)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
D'oh! I forgot to change the rating in the Subject line.

Teh pr0nz is in Chapter 2. I felt that hard core fucking might've been a little too crass for the 1st day of the Month of Love.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-01 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakespherical.livejournal.com
Oh I love me some hardcore but then you know I am a depraved scary woman...don't judge me please.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 04:41 am (UTC)
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (kino porn)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
People who love hardcore porn are indeed depraved.

People who WRITE hardcore porn are HOPELESS.

;-D

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-02 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evrymeeveryyou.livejournal.com
Wonderful story my dear. I love her voice - it's right on point. Can't wait to see Chapter 2.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-02 02:05 am (UTC)
ext_391411: I'd like that with a side order of Vala. (waitress)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
Oh gosh thanks! I worked extra hard to try to get Vala's voice close to what I hear on the show. Am relieved that she's recognizable!

I wanna work on completing the story right this second, but I have a Gen fic deadline to post first.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 02:24 am (UTC)
ext_28912: (Default)
From: [identity profile] bkwurm1.livejournal.com
Beautiful set up. Really flows nicely. Love getting inside Vala's head.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 04:43 am (UTC)
ext_391411: I'd like that with a side order of Vala. (waitress)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
Thanks!

If it weren't for Vala, I wouldn't've become a Stargate fan. She's my "gateway" drug to the fandom, and I'm now addicted to the rest of the characters.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misshapenmuse.livejournal.com
I got a preview of this weeks before and it's just as wonderful as it was then, Campy. :D

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 07:54 am (UTC)
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (iz-ded)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
ooohhhh ::smish smish smish:: So sweet of you to say!

PS: Hope the weather where you are hasn't deprived you of electricity/heat.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 08:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misshapenmuse.livejournal.com
*hugs* you're welcome.

Nah, we are keeping warm. The power didn't go out and I don't think it's going to.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magnavox-23.livejournal.com
You know I absolutely adore this. And the offer for a podcast is still open, I am still stuck with have that deep voice, lol!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 08:43 am (UTC)
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (iz-ded)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
OMG if you record this as a podcast I WILL SEND YOU ONE MILLION RICHARD DEAN ANDERSONs AS THANKS OMG OMG OMG
Image
(http://pics.livejournal.com/campylobacter/pic/0010dbdx/)

::flaily flailing::

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-03 08:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magnavox-23.livejournal.com
LOL! I'm sure I could find some use for all one million of them... ;P

I'll email you.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-11 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hummingfly67.livejournal.com
You've definitely nailed Vala's voice here!

Is it my imagination, or do Daniel's lips look really pouty in that picture? (almost pursed...maybe he's dreaming of Vala)

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Date: 2011-02-11 10:34 pm (UTC)
ext_391411: There is a god sitting here with wet fingers. (fruitcake)
From: [identity profile] campylobacter.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Daniel's lips are ALWAYS pouty. If he were dreaming of Vala before seeing her face, then his dreams must've come true!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-02-12 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hummingfly67.livejournal.com
Duh me! I forgot that pic is before the unveiling. perhaps he's got a bit of psychic in him?

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